Kia ora Antonio, your Haiku is very descriptive! Are you writing about a Scoria cone eruption with a fire fountain of lava? Could you add an image to your slides to make them look more interesting? You could draw an image or make one digitally (in Piskel or Google drawings etc). Also remember to add a Mote of you reading your Haiku. Blog you later, Megan : )
Kia ora Antonio, your Haiku is very descriptive! Are you writing about a Scoria cone eruption with a fire fountain of lava? Could you add an image to your slides to make them look more interesting? You could draw an image or make one digitally (in Piskel or Google drawings etc). Also remember to add a Mote of you reading your Haiku. Blog you later, Megan : )
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Antonio, great work on your haiku poem. It really created a picture in my mind of a volcano erupting. Well done!
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Ms Fletcher, thanks for the comment. When I was writing this it also created a picture in my mind.
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