Friday 13 August 2021

Coin Operated Writing

 Hello fellow viewers. Today I have made a story based on a video called Coin Operated. He is the link.

I hope you like my story!

Enjoy.


A boy aged 6-7 with a Jet pack and Space Helmet was playing with his toy rocket while walking on a street in the afternoon in a city. Suddenly, he spots a coin operated rocket, he walks over to it and tugs on his mum’s jacket and points to the rocket, his mum shakes her head but the boy checks his pockets and finds a coin, he puts the coin into the machine and hops in. He presses the button , the countdown has begun, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1, the boy held his breath and clenched his teeth and… The rocket started to bob up and down. The boy is triggered because he wanted the rocket to take off to the moon. The boy chucks his helmet onto the ground with disappointment but looks up at a lemonade sign, the boy gets an idea! He goes home and puts a lemonade stand together and waits for customers. He finally gets customers and waits for his money bag to fill. He grows older and older and older until he finally has a lot of money. He takes that money all the way to the coin operated rocket and looks at it with delight and hope, he picks up the bag full of money and tips it into the machine and puts the once full bag onto the floor. He hops into the rocket and presses the button, he waits but nothing happens. He presses the button again and again but nothing happens. He starts to cry. He lifts his hand to whack the machine but he puts no power into his whack, but suddenly the rocket starts to shake as well as the other things around it. It aims up at the moon and blasts off!


Have you made a story like this before?


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1 comment:

  1. Antonio it seems like you enjoyed writing this story, I certainly enjoyed reading it. I like your use of words such as 'held his breath and clenched his teeth'....it makes me have a great picture in my head of what your characters are doing.
    Well done
    Deb

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