Talofa , I’m Salamasina in Room 8 from Owairaka District School. Thank you for posting this amazing story! I enjoyed the part when the toys went to the future. This reminded me of when I made a book about Bradley's toys but I have not finished it yet. Maybe next time you could put pictures when it is just the text! I noticed when I was reading it that it had some thing that did not make sense so maybe later you could fix it up? Don't forget to check out me blog My blog. Blog you later.
Talofa , I’m Salamasina in Room 8 from Owairaka District School. Thank you for posting this amazing story! I enjoyed the part when the toys went to the future. This reminded me of when I made a book about Bradley's toys but I have not finished it yet. Maybe next time you could put pictures when it is just the text! I noticed when I was reading it that it had some thing that did not make sense so maybe later you could fix it up? Don't forget to check out me blog My blog. Blog you later.
ReplyDeleteHi Salamasina. Thank you for your feedback. I will check the mistake out. Can you please Tell me where the mistake is?
DeleteIt is on page Seven at the second to last sentence. Blog you later!
DeleteThanks But it is very hard to change but thanks I will get that fixed now
DeleteIt is fixed.
ReplyDeleteBLOG YA LATER!